From ice water's nest ascends the strawhat,
Pumping pastle-esque glitz upon dead dust,
Exhaling fresh breeze which songbirds caw at,
Thus summons the citric zest of summer.
Grass blades glimmer in war against warm wind,
Waves shampoo deep desert dunes of cool flames,
As rays of light ignite man's heart and skin
Nostalgia joy floods life's conscious veins.
Straw unbinds as depths engulf lime colour,
Nature drowns in neutralised winter's touch,
Streams of silver transform darkness' smother,
Human's bed love in pale light isn't much.
Earth decays and slumbers in icy moon,
But summer sun breathes life for next day soon.
Although, I gotta admit, I think iambic pentametre is the most confusing shit I've ever heard about. We kinda touched into that in english class... I think.
I can't even spell it, let alone pronounce it. xD
Iambic is all about the beats of a line and the emphasis on the words. It's difficult to get the iambic beat right, as well as the syllables of the line, too. Pentametre is 5 beats per line, but you can get things like Sestametre (6 beats) and other ones, too. I think it may be spelt Pentameter in American English, though (since you tend to switch the r's and e's around at the end of the words).
... I think I sorta get it. x3 I just think it sounds pretty.
Oh, and, I think so, yeah. I was just unsure of that. xD Although I still remember mispronouncing it badly during English, which was somewhat embarrassing.
You have an excellent usage of English.
It's so good when something just pops into your head and you're able to express in in the way you know best.
Very nice